Parts of the prayer, you could argue, are quite prophetic. 
Yes indeedy

i did though feel it was not original and wanted actually to add stuff.. and echo jj GOD knows exactly where stuff is
By all means add more stuff

and yeah God (and Spirit) knows where stuff is too
Have just read it through, and was struck by two things: (i) how similar some of was to simple child prayers
well I guess it is apt since we are all Gods children
Yes it does make you think - but mainly to help us reflect on our relationship with each other and with God - you know - God being there (somewhere) within each of us - but to still do that with a bit of humour